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Post by tinuviel on Sept 30, 2009 11:33:59 GMT 3
Hi Dina Thanks for the comments. And yes - Emma is beginning to show a little violent streak. She may have sorted out Katya for the moment - but other things are about to happen wich may rock the steady world they've been inhabiting lately.  Emma and Marat may be about to lose their way a little - just as D and D seem to be getting closer. C'est la vie - can't have everyone happy at the same time can we now?? That would be too easy.  And loved your chapter - made me want to cry. that girl is hurting so badly - and so is Marat in his own way. Glad he has his memories - but just makes it worse that he can't share them with her yet. So Sad!  |
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Post by tinuviel on Sept 30, 2009 12:29:06 GMT 3
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Post by audrey on Oct 1, 2009 7:13:19 GMT 3
Hi All
Chapter 24 is out.
Find out the aftermath of the party. Marat points out and quite rightly so, that Sophia can't have her cake and eat it too.
Happy reading!
Audrey
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Post by tini on Oct 1, 2009 19:56:49 GMT 3
it's so sad but you wrote it so well, Dina! Poor Satine, she's hurt so much and Marat doesn't know how to help her, but loved the things he said to her and glad his mum was there to help! Going to read the others later, looking forward to them  but first a thesis is waiting  |
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Post by tini on Oct 2, 2009 0:12:57 GMT 3
Tally Oh So fast it can change between E and M,not happy for a long time...seems like there will be a "showdown" in Valencia, looking forward to it! And really like that D and D are getting closer again and of course that Katya isn't a problem anymore..but sure there will be others soon or are already there Audrey Loved that Marat told her how he really feels even it kind of end their friendship  ...seems like her heart knows some answers but like she said, she is confused. Can't wait to see how it will go on between these two! |
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Post by Annaya on Oct 2, 2009 13:34:57 GMT 3
OKAY!! Finished with all the latest reads! Took me a while and eyes are a little sore, but it was all well worth it! LOL Dina! OMG, it's all so very sad. Glad Rauza is there to care for Satine. I feel for Marat in there. He wants to so much to share his little triumph with the memory coming back, but couldn't. Tally! That Roddick! Arrgg! what a MoFo, LOL. And Ben. Ben, Ben, Ben...little naughty Ben. I smell a devious plan.. Audrey! Gosh, talk about internal twists and turns. LOL. I like the confrontation part towards the end. He finally gets his feeling out there. Now, we just have to wait for Sophia... |
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Post by tinuviel on Oct 2, 2009 15:31:35 GMT 3
AUDREY
Hey - I just got cai#ught up with your latest chapter. Very well written - I can feel Marat's pain and Sophia's confusion. What a tangle of emotions. And courageous of Marat to put himself out there and admit how he feels - lots of guys would keep it well hidden.
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Post by audrey on Oct 5, 2009 11:32:23 GMT 3
AUDREY Hey - I just got cai#ught up with your latest chapter. Very well written - I can feel Marat's pain and Sophia's confusion. What a tangle of emotions. And courageous of Marat to put himself out there and admit how he feels - lots of guys would keep it well hidden. Hi Tally Thanks for the nice comment. I didn't really know the story was going to go in that direction. Ideas sort of just pop up as I go along! Who knows what's going to happen next! |
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Post by audrey on Oct 5, 2009 11:36:10 GMT 3
Audrey! Gosh, talk about internal twists and turns. LOL. I like the confrontation part towards the end. He finally gets his feeling out there. Now, we just have to wait for Sophia... Thanks Annie. The confrontation was needed to get things moving along. I'd had enough of them skirting around each other! |
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Post by tinuviel on Oct 5, 2009 19:29:25 GMT 3
Chapter 161 is now there to read in the 'Library' Not for the faint hearted as Emma and Marat head for more troubles in their stormy relationship. As Dima would say 'They need their heads knocking together' although I sometimes think he and Dinara are just as bad.  |
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but first a thesis is waiting 
...seems like her heart knows some answers but like she said, she is confused. Can't wait to see how it will go on between these two!
