Say, What? Tennis fics Feedback/Discussion Thread

[Annaya]

222...

Great job as usual so far Tally. I'm quite enjoying the relationship between Elena and Marat!

[tinuviel]

Thanks for the comments Annie. I always like to imagine an older woman being good for him on occasion and I think Elena fits the bill very well. I like their relationship too.

[tinuviel]

And now for a break from all the trauma with Marat and Emma and Co. - Chapter 37 of Game, Set and Love is now available in the Richard Gasquet Fiction Corner of the Attic. Enjoy it. Sorry it was so long in coming - the other one got me side tracked.

Just waiting for Richie to start his match in India. Good luck RG!

[Annaya]

Posted the second part of chapter 77 of In Search of Hope!

More fun ensues...if you call it fun. lol
Marat is debating within himself about what he thinks of Hallie and Teddy being together. Keith has Chuck cornered in every possible way, and Hallie is revealed to be the mastermind. What happens next? Also, Hallie and Nastya gets in another altercation. Nastya wants to be physical, but Hallie has other ideas.

Hope you enjoy.

[tinuviel]

Nice one Annie. Lots of fun too as usual. But I do feel for Marat. Soooo sad. But at least it looks as though he may have made a bit of a break from Nastya which can only be good. Shame there's only one Hallie to go round - you couldn't invent a twin for one of them could you? LOL ;D ;D

[audrey]

Hi Annie

Happy new year! I’ve thoroughly missed reading your story and was so glad to see you posted a new chapter. Hallie sure knows how to get under Nastya’s skin. Loved how she handled everything. As for Marat…he breaks my heart! Poor guy. I’ll make him feel better!

Btw, how was your friend’s wedding? I hope there wasn’t as much drama as Jeff and Rose’s!

I’ve also posted another chapter. Sorry everyone, I’ve been really slack with the writing. I’m still trying to get back into the swing of things after the Christmas break. Enjoy!

[audrey]

Hi Tally

I got chills reading the end of Chapter 225 when Marat finds out who Ellie really is! I'm really loving the suspense however I hope Emma and Andy are going to be ok. Poor Marat, he has no idea what's going on.

[tinuviel]

Hey thanks for the comments Audrey. Just read yours and logged in to post comment when I saw you'd read mine.

First of all yours. I love these two together. And I really understand Sophia's reluctance and hesitation - such a big step and I expect she's scared of either making him feel 'trapped' or of altering all the things that are so good with them. But still ..... they are so good together.

Loved the introduction of Dasha and Roman's little baby - such a great way to demonstrate Marat's soft side. So sweet. And it certainly seemed to impress the girl.!

As to my rather more dark sided story at the moment - yeah poor Marat who is caught without a clue as to what is happening. Should be posting another chapter tomorrow which should explain a bit more and reveal more of Ellie's plans and motives. And Emma and Andy still have a way to go before the suffering is over I'm afraid. Must be all those crime novels I like reading on holiday - gives me a sinister mind. LOL! Thanks for reading and commenting - really appreciated.

Oh and chaps 226 and 227 are also there if you haven't already caught up with them.

[tinuviel]

Just when you thought you'd got all caught up.....

Chapter 228 of Vienna Waltz is now in the Safin corner of the Attic. Hope you enjoy it.

Marat is very miserable - but hopefully life will improve soon.

Enjoy

[tinuviel]

And to celebrate him getting into the third round of the Australian Open there is a Richard Gasquet Fanfic new chapter available in his corner of the attic. Check it out

Chapter 38 of Game Set and Love - don't miss it.